A blind woman I wandered
in the shadowy woods, oblivious
of the shades of my emotions
as I left behind the years of eerie
silences, unspoken verses,
random sentiments…
only to exhume hues of pinks,
blues, blacks and grays buried
alive in the unfathomable pits of
heart, unearthed the rusty clots
and residual tissues from the
bony emaciated rib-cage to
set them free in the translucent
liquids to flow in vast abyss
while listening to faint whispers
from my heart between the
chasms of two throbbing beats;
Shh! Let it go…
Let it go…
Let it go…Shh!
Hundred years of silences..
Wow
Thanks a lot for your kind read, truly appreciate it! Regards
Absolutely fantastic!! You did it….and with such genius!!
Brilliant!!
Thanks a lot Bill for your kind words, you remain the inspiration behind this piece. Thanks once again!
My pleasure!!
Let the silence roar my friend. Lovely read
Thanks for the read. Blessings!
Always a pleasure reading your work
You make me smile 😊
I am glad I do. 😊😊
You surely do my friend have a very joyful and bright day ahead!
You have a wonderful day too 🌸😊
Pranaam🙏
😊🌸
This is so wonderfully expressed ………. silence couldn’t scream louder than this
I am so glad Sakshi you do, this poem is conceived out of my comment to Bill :), hope you are doing great
All is well dear . Happy Dussehra
Same too you, I am little late for pooja so today I am cooking food for the gods, halwa, puri and cholle on requests of my mother-in law 😁
Arrey wah …….a full feast …… We make these on ashtami. Btw one day you should host a WordPress Meetup with with your recipes on the menu ………😝
I needed to do same for ashtami, but I forgot and I was reminded yesterday so ran to the nearest Indian store, got stuff and now making. Sure ill host a feast but no guarantees afterwards!!
Haa haaa no prob I am sure we’ll still take a chance 😝
All up to you, madame!!!
I don’t know how you do it. But Awesome also falls short of praise it deserves.
Thanks Sunil, I am so humbled by your very kind words. Truly appreciate it!
You are welcome Tanya. Your work always inspires.
Thanks that’s very kind of you! 😊
Also would request if I could use some of your poems or verses in my stories. I have 2-3 ideas in mind.
But ofcourse with due credit.
Sure you can!!
Thanks Tanya. You are very generous. 😀
My pleasure!
You can reblogg!!
Yes that I will do. But the pattern of the story will be
2-3 lines of your poem
Story
2-3 lines of the same or different porm
Story
In re logging this will not be possible.
I can give the links after the story is over. If it is okay with you.
It’s ok!!
Great. I hope I would be able to do justice of your poems.😀
Ur going to have the story on your blog?
Yes.
Ok seek any help you need from me in story I am good in description, we can work together and plan, I will reblogg your story too.
That would be great. Let me make a basic framework for the story. I will mail it to you and then leave all the description to you. Your ideas are always welcome.😃
Great 👍
🤗
Reblogg In your stories!!
Lovely!
Thanks a lot Warren, truly appreciate it!
I have to agree with the others. This is wonderfully penned!
Thanks Winnie for your valuable comments and kindness. I am truly indebted!
It’s always a pleasure, Tanya! ❤️