The patron goddess
of lonely beings,
Lady Aloofness,
adorned in ashen
maxi enthroned
on errie silence
visited last
dampish evening
Between her
listening and
mine chatters
The maiden
Stillness stood
but the resolute
goddess coiled
around my neck
like a raven
serpent slithering
going mary
go-round
strangulating
all the chords
dwelling in humble
throat, chocking
any word, hissing
away any sense
smothering any
desire with her
venomous fangs!
Lady Aloofness
oh the Lady Aloofness.Sometimes it just gobbles up our existance.Nicely penned my friend.
Megha, The Lady Aloofness is damn resolute and snobbish!
yes absolutely
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Extremely well written gothic genre style poem.
This Lady Aloofness sounds like a vampiress with her fangs.
Oh yes, Lady Aloofness our patron saint. Well now that you’ve mentioned count I can see the similarities between Vampiress and her…:)
This is wonderfully penned, dear Tanya! Feisty!
Sometimes Aloofness takes hold over you, just penned it through my imagination!
Sighing to the beauty of your words, Tanya.
Thats very kind of you !
Oh my. This is so well written. The aloofness so well explained
Thanks Shantanu, humbled by your kind remarks!
My pleasure always
Bravo. Lovd the creativity. This was an entertaining read.
Thanks my friend, lady Aloofness I’d very determined, isn’t?
LOL