Neat satin silhouettes
narrates a mundane tale
of tireless nights filled
with loops and knits
Days make sense
doing dirty chores
frantic zig-zag
of mood swings
Mischievous curves
embraces salty sweat
carnal desires rebuked
suffered a psychosis
Psychedelic talks
in realms of fantasy
burden of one ruby
ceases any chance
Refuged in verses
of random erotica
eerie silence
possesses sheets
Gaunt couch
joint residuals
Stale stench
hovers ceilings
echoes denial!!
Profound and powerful!!!
Thanks Bill, I truly appreciate you kind words!
Always!!
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Wow. You have painted such a a abstained artistry that I am completely drawn into it. The neat satin sure screams loud of the void of sensuous, lust or love
Thanks a lot dear, I-feel humbled! Poem is all about love and passion😊I’m so glad you liked it!
My pleasure always
Oh my! So beautiful. Going to read it again 🖤
Thanks a lot Jaya I am so glad you liked it. I truly appreciate it.
A silent surrender into a surreal world poetically defined.
nice job!
Good morning Eddie, spot on it was a surrender. Thank you my friend for your generosity! Blessings!
Blessings to you Tanya
Thanks, blessings to you too!
Intriguing. I read it three times for in-depth meaning. So the mood swings and chores take away the sensual, creating a less desire, although taking a refuge in that which stimulates creates a renewed energy and desire. Just guessing. 😉
Ron, it’s about a woman who is longing for affection and some love, while filling her times with mundane chores and psychedelics! Neat satin symbolizes bed!
🙂 Thanks Tanya. Isn’t it interesting how each mind picks up certain things allowing the creativity to flourish. Maybe the love and affection can be brought by one who learns of her longing and picks her up from the mundane chores of life – creating a bright glow through the satin.
Absolutely true, the realities of life are not fancy but mundane but ordinare can be made extraordinary through little words of love and compassion.
This is pure Bliss to read.The juxtaposition of emotions very beautifully expressed.
You really have a talent with words, Tanya
Thanks a lot for your generosity, I am truly humbled. I enjoy your writing a lot, I must take this opportunity to tell you what a wonderful writer you are.
My pleasure Tanya.Thanks for all your aduations.I;m humbled by your words.
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Again breathtaking
Thanks, my take on desires and avoidance
Caution my dear I failed I this sphere
How come?