I took sinful dips in vast seas of love embracing
you tightly, with a terror of drowning in the
deep waters of desires. Wines from your
lips did wonders, for I went and came back
from the hell fires, taking sinful dips
in the waters of love.
Shedding all vestiges of shame, clothed only
in translucent moon-light while holding
you tightly, trying to sooth the amber
of my flesh with your cigar breaths.
I performed holy ablutions to wash off any
lingering doubts of cravings, let raven
hair loose to sway in directions unknown,
only to clasp a caress in my nets in the
deepest pits of desires.
While softly twirling on the rubenesque flutes
of thirsts, closed my eyes and swam to the
farthest corners of desire to discover a
dated relic of yours resting in the
sea-beds of my whims.
Knowing that magical things might happen,
I allowed myself to completely penetrate
in the realms of darkest fantasies to,
accomplish once a flawless rapture of bodies.
While you played your wicked games
I let lose more shames just to capture a
whiff of your perfume, to break an ancient
spell of absence while taking sinful
dips in vast seas of love.
Speechless……. sensuality, subtlety,desires wrapped in one poetry
Thanks a lot for reading this out, truly appreciate it. I am so glad you enjoyed it , humbled to see your amazing comments.
My pleasure always 😊
How are you dear? In last poem of yours, u seemed little rattled?
Nah nah …all good …..my anger always is short lived ….died as soon as I finished writing 😆😘. Thank you so much for asking my friend ……work is a bit hectic so writing and reading is super slow
Like mine, my anger is short-lived too, wish to be little more firm sometimes. I know managing work and home. Take care
Thank you so much 😊 honestly I am kinda glad it’s short lived …… Firmness without anger is my preference 😜.
Have a great day Tanya
Very true!
Agree with Sakshi, this post deserves applause! Brilliant work!
Thanks for your generosity, I truly appreciate your comments. I am really humbled that you liked my poem.
Incredibly evocative, sensual and compelling. Took my breath away…so beautiful!
Hey Bill, so thanks for your generosity. I am so glad that you liked it 😉
Loved it!! 😊
Thanks Bill!
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Amazing
Thanks a lot dear, truly appreciate it. Blessings
Wow. I have only one word. A true master piece. You work is beyond beautiful. Still in awe
Thanks a lot, Shantanu I am humbled by your kind words!
My pleasure always
👍
You left me with no words …Starting from the title till the very end , you caught reader’s attention with your wonderful imagery …Tanya you are an exceptional writer …✨❣️
Thanks a lot dear for your generousity, I am truly humbled by your kind remarks. Thanks alot🙏
Really beautiful!
These sinful dips filled with intrigue and more.We always merge ourselves deep in the quest of finding us and people we love so intently
Very true Megha, these flights of imagination and dips are quest. Thanks for reading i truly appreciate your time.
My pleasure Tanya
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Breathtaking
Thanks a lot dear for your kind read, sry for the late reply I found your comment in my spam.
Pleasure mine
😊
What a beautifully magnificent poem. ❤
Thanks a lot Mr. Dracula for your kind read, truly appreciate your kind remarks. I am so glad you like it.
Beautiful poem to read 🌷🙏🌷happy weekend 😊👏
Thanks 🙏 for your very kind words, appreciate it truly.
So welcome 🌷🙏❤️🌷
Very well done. Eros is a tuff thing to write about and you are nearly a master 😊😊
Thanks 🙏, didn’t know it was that good, but your encouraging.
very good, keep writing ❤️
Thanks I’m trying to write….
I look forward to more 😊
These words of praises from you 🤪are too much….
❤️❤️
Depth, desire, struggle. This is Charles Bukwoski level. 👌👌