I know not…
Was it a dream or a drowsy opiate slumber?
As I stood on a tortured sea-shore
and cast my eye on the swollen waves
passionately kissing my naked feet
making love to me with a brutish force
taking me in its azure vinyl embrace
slowly grasping my flaming flesh with
a fiery I’ve never known before,
an uproar a stir in my fragile body
exhausted since centuries of decay
the foamy saline waters entering in me
through all nook and corners, fissures and holes
mixing in all the violent blues with the
crimson reds, crawling stealthily like million
serpents, wriggling gushing upwards
Oh! a sensation a loud roar within
a rapture somewhere, an euphoric elation
an electric jolt worth thousands bolts!
My enslaved body in an act of consummation
so strong, my heart-ached, soul-shuddered
at the violation so brutal, like a hapless bird
caught in a nib of a savage Falcon from the
far-east, I let it happen without any contest
Why? Because I possessed it too and let loose
the cinders of ancient fire burning in me
for I didn’t surrender, and let it go on without
a single doubt or shame nor did I curse
the gods above, knowing that no desire is
mightier than the other, for yearnings
have the same frenzy everywhere.
But I know not…
Was it a dream or a drowsy opiate slumber?
Beautiful flowing writing as usual. Love this.
Thanks a lot for reading it and for your kind words, I am glad you like it.
Loved it. Especially the last line.
Thaks alot Sunil for taking out the time and reading it. I am glad you liked it, by the way I am waiting for the long version of your spooky tales. Really looking forward to them.
To read you work. Pleasure is mine.
As for my spooky tales. Will definately work on the.
Just need to finish two more in my Dracula series
Learn to fly baby and Dracula goes for blood test. Hopefully finish them this week.
wonderful, looking forward!
Thank you.
So compelling and evocative Tanya!! I absolutely loved this!! Really well done!!
Good morning Bill, thanks alot for reading this out, I am so glad you liked it.
Good morning Tanya! So beautifully crafted. The pleasure was all mine!
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Wow. Splendid. I read it twice to feel the essence. The yearnings so well expressed standing alone my the sea shore and the triggered with the cerulean water touching you and making you express desires. No desire is sin❤️❤️
Hi, Shantanu thanks a lot for taking out time to read it, I am really glad you liked it and indeed no desire is mightier than the other😊
You are so very welcome
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Wow!
Thanks Vidhur for the wow, I appreciate it 🙂
Love came to the surface and found expression in sincerity of words from a heart filled deep within
Thank you dearest Eddie for reading and leaving your kind remarks, Indeed I agree these words are straight from the heart. Sometimes mundane things can stir something inside you!
Good writing making it hard to say it is a dream or an opiate slumber. You are good with words to make us think Tanya !!
Thanks alot for your kind words, I am truly humbled. I am so glad my words resonate with you. Thank You!
Yes Tanya Your words touched me that way. I like good writing and you also made me think about the question. You are very welcome Tanya !
Well I am so glad that it made you reflect and ponder over the question. What question if I may ask
I am glad my writing made you reflect and ponder over, may I ask what question it made you think of?
the question was is this a dream or a opiate slumber ?
I got it!. some dreams are so real and certain realities like a dream.😊
Yes exactly ! I have had dreams that were so life like and certain realities that were similar dream like trance. It was like it was so unreal but was it ?
I agree sometimes you cant distinguish the reality and dreams.
A lovely piece!
I am glad you liked it, thanks a ton!
My pleasure!
Definitely a worthy read
Thanks for reading, I appreciate your feedback! Blessings!
“so strong, my heart-ached, soul-shuddered
at the violation so brutal, like a hapless bird
caught in a nib of a savage Falcon from the
far-east, I let it happen without any contest
Why? Because I possessed it too and let loose
the cinders of ancient fire burning in me
for I didn’t surrender, and let it go on without
a single doubt or shame nor did I curse
the gods above, knowing that no desire is
mightier than the other, for yearnings
have the same frenzy everywhere.
But I know not…”
This is wonderful! Beautiful language it all comes together so well. I identify with it all!
Thank you very much for stopping by, I am glad you liked it 🙂
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