I aimed for the mountain
top while rare florets ooze
from the ground
beneath me, I longed
for the sparkling stars
neglecting the lapis lazulis
laying on the beds of the mighty rivers
I craved to suckle on the
heavenly nectar, while
bees synchronized intricate
combs in my backyard
then when the dusk spread
its raven wings, I reclined
on my couch, cursing
the Fortuna for the missed
chances in Paradise, while
the orchards around prepare
for the early fruition.
Powerfully poignant poem.
Thanks Drac I’m so glad you liked it, your kind insights are always welcomed!
What exotic words you use. Like lapis lazulis. Splendor my friend
Thanks so much Shantanu , I’ve enjoyed classic literature and have pulled out certain words to incorporate into mine 😉!
Smart move. 😊🌸
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A complete joy to read.
I’m glad my words resonated and you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot 🙏
Brilliant 👌
Thanks a lot Sakshi for your kind words, truly appreciate it!
My pleasure
Lovely
Really beautiful. 🙂
Thanks so much Ramyani, how very kind of you! truly appreciate it!
My pleasure ☺️☺️
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Absolutely love this Tanya!! Wonderful!!
How we crave for lofty things while leaving out what we have in our reach. Thanks for reading Bill,appreciate it!
My pleasure!!
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What a beautiful & expressive piece. Love the picture 🥰❤️💛💚
Aww thanks, you made my day:) ❤️❤️
Awwwz!!! Thanks Hun! You have done the same for me. That’s what life is all about (((HUGS))). “Namastè & One Love”❤️💛💚
Absolutely ❤️❤️,Namaste 🙏
This one feels really poetic – as if you’re in love with poetry itself
Thanks again for appreciating my words, you write so very good and I’ve read many poets who write so exceptionally good 🙂
My pleasure