Once again spiraling down
the bottomless pits of
all-consuming thoughts.
Is it the high tides in the sea
or simply a patch of dark clouds?
May be it’s the Northern winds
curled up by silent thoughts.
May be the dystopic reality or
my aging myopia from whose
prism , I can faintly view the
blurring horizon at whose
mid-point, saffron daylight
ceases into the kohl
darkness of night.
Absolutely wonderful imagery and though the lines are so full of despondency, they are stark and certainly wonderful.
Wow what an insight, death of the poet and the birth of the reader. When a reflection is more profound than the few lines of poetry. How kind of you Shanyu truly appreciate it. Regards.
Well that is certainly kind of you to say. I’m glad you appreciate the comment. Keep writing.
Can you please record this poetry in your voice and share ? Maybe thru messengef
Thanks for your kind words, I don’t know how to do it, can try on YouTube may be!
As you wish. If you dont wanna publish , you can just send over to me. But youtube would be gud . Totally upto u
I’ll try may be learn how to put it on YouTube 👍
You can in fact post here i guess. That would be far easier. Record a video and upload on blog . It will stay to your audience only .
Ok great I’ll find out and definitely post something 🙂
There is an option upload media. Try it. And awaiting eagerly for recital
All ryt but why eager 🧐
Hehe. Dont worry. Just that I like recitals. Poet or writer reciting their own work gives a real flavor to it. As pauses , tone give more insight into the work. Chill.
I got it!
Won’t press more. Ur will.
😊
Who said you are teacher ? You are detective in making. 😂😂
How?
You doubt . Thats basic requirement to be a detective. Congrats you are qualified for another field. 😂😂😂
Lol
There on insta. Lets test your detective skills there 😉
No I’m not, 😊
Tg. I was saved from a face-off. Am bad at comebacks 😂😂
Well I’m not active much on social networking being a full time professional and a toddler to take care of, have no time at hands.
All i can say is my bad. No messengers and stuff
Yep only blogging
Cool ma’am. 😉
Chck out . Wrote lot of mess. See if you can give feedback or suggestions. Would like to improvise
How?