In the flat plateaus across the tall mountains,
a mythical land with blistering fountains
adorns like a jewel known as Valley of Hope
A fabled basin where the birds of north elopes
The gentle wizard of autumn transforms colors
of the leaves into hues of pinks, and yellows
Knowing well that the change is the divine law,
and the autumn’s magic spell is without a flaw.
On the pilgrimage heavenly birds who falls
like Icarus, rests in golden shrines and calls
the withered leaves and petals to surrender
on the little graves on the way to holy voyage.
A land abundant with imperial orchids so royal
brimming with lovely Magnolias and flamboyant
Bougainvillea’s, here migratory birds make homes
away from winter’s wrath in cozy Mangrove wombs.
Wow this is so so good.. just beautifully written… what a paradise <3
Thanks a lot dear, for reading out, truly appreciate you kind remarks.
Life is a migratory bird and each day, it flies into new destinies. For the new exploration.
Ma’am you have written very beautiful poem. I loved it very much😊😊
Very true my friend, life indeed is like a migratory bird. Thanks a lot for your kind input and sharing with us. I truly appreciate it!
Lovely 💓
Thanks darling for taking out time to read it. Truly appreciate it!
I so love this. What a brilliant depiction ❤️❤️
Merci, Monseuir! Glad that you liked it!!
merci beaucoup madame. Pleasure reading it
de probleme!!
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My French knowledge is restricted to only until that part
mine too, its just that my appearance is native and heart pure french :). French can take me out of France but not french out of me
Haha.
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Such a vivid imagery you have painted with your words and the land hold hope for healing and rest for the dying souls. Just like Shangri la.You have the talent of making the reader get lost in your magical words.
Thanks a lot, Megha for your kind words, I am so glad my words resonated. Truly appreciate!
My pleasure Tanya.
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I love this, Tanya! I love the imagery. 😊
Thanks Winnie for a kind read. Truly appreciate it. How are you doing?
You’re welcome, Tanya! Same old routine. 😉 I haven’t tried the baklava yet since there’s no available phyllo dough in the grocery. I have read reviews and I’m dying to try it. I love pistachios.
I know even for me it took time to find phyllo, try making the dough at home. It should be some easier way!
I’ll do that. 😉
That’s their fate and journey
True that’s their fate!
U are the queen of writers if I could award u I would give u a great hug🙋
aww thanks dear, hugs great compliment. Look around there are many great writers around!
I am happy with yours always
Thanks a lot dear, you are always kind!
A poem painted so beautifully!
Thanks, Linda for your kind read, I am glad you liked it.
Lovely!
Thanks a lot Warren, thank you for a kind read. God bless you!
Always a pleasure! Blessings to you too!