Pirouetting on the single
stringed lyres of the cerulean waves,
of the bottomless ocean.
Tonight is the night of copulation,
of full moon and blue tides.
Whirling round to evoke
Poseidon to take notice
of mine saline tear drops
consummating with the azure
foamy waters out of which
gushes forth tiny lemon
droplets of effervescent
28 thoughts on “Consummation”
A great synthesis of swimming in ocean waves, classical mythological imagery and making love seemingly becoming one in this great poem.
Aww thank you Dracula you are always so generous and encouraging with your words. Truly appreciate it. Glad you liked it.
Beautiful one! Only if I was able to play with words this beautifully 🥺❤️
Hi Anjali thanks for your kind words, truly your magnificent in your own way. Appreciate it. Regards.
Thankyou ma’am ❤️ But you’re awesome 🥺
I love the poem. The best thing is that you create this vivid picture with the spectacular words that you use.. great! Take care❤️
Thanks a lot Ramayani for your kind words, I’m glad you liked it. Hoping you are safe and sound. Regards.
It’s my pleasure ❤️
Beautiful flowing of imaginary view…
How sweet 🙂
haha…those were the days
Keep smiling , I like when my friends are happy…
aww…you said friend 🌹
Of course… 🙏
Pure charm 💐
I’m very handsome 🤪🤪..but also crazy 🍰🍰
That’s why I called you a friend and not a lover…
Combination of dazzling handsomeness and cruel craziness is too much for my humble personality and looks!
you are too adorable…I have to go out and face reality for a while…thanks, virtual goddess 🙏🙏
actual goddess 🤗
🙂 I’m no goddess but you are a fabulous poet and must keep on writing ✍️…
Thank you, and you must keep at it too. 🙆🙆🙆
I’ll as long as pangs of loneliness will haunt me….
alone in a crowd? 😊