Morning sun shone
in its full glory.
Coffee quarrels
and stiff body.
in its full glory.
Coffee quarrels
and stiff body.
Artificial catnap,
guess sleep-aid pills;
again did it’s wonder.
Neighbor’s black poodle,
Vanity lazing on mosaic porch
Lusting a blooming orchid
licking edges of master’s fingersโฆ
Spray roses with no
fragrance hung neatly
in cheap Edwardian vase
on a yellowish marble mantle
Incoherent gibberish bla bla
of quirky Morning shows
incredulous laughter
delinquent sarcasms
Countdown begins
midst sips of sooty coffee.
Quality of life measured by
barrage of human follyโฆ
A pleasure to read
Thanks for your kind read and insight! Truly appreciate it!
What an artistry. You display the mind conundrum so well
Thanks Shantanu, how very kind of you. Truly appreciate it!
My pleasure always
๐ thanks my friend!
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A very poetic expression of how your morning begins.
Thanks a lot I wrote it long back, during darker phases now a days I am getting up post noon so donโt really know what goes in morning ๐คญ
Lovely.
Thanks Sunil, wish you a very happy Diwali!
Happy diwali to you too but have you preponed diwali in Us.๐
I know but still itโs all celebration!
Yes I know. A very happy diwali to you. How do you celebrate it there.
Cooking and going to temple just at home really
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Love the way you have described the start of a monotonous morning and the human folly.
wrote it some time back, it was a lazy lazy morning and I just pondered over the activities around me! Thanks for liking it !
Loved reading it.
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Nicely written!
I am so glad you liked it. Thanks alot! ๐
My pleasure!
A great closing line for your poem!
Thank you for stopping by Dwight, Iโm glad my words resonated!
You are welcome!
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terrific word play; love ‘sooty coffee’ and ‘barrage of human folly’ : it is the latter that keeps us poets amused ๐
I love coffee and writing :). There was a time when I wud sit in coffee houses for hours and read :). Thank you very much John for your wonderful comment!
easy; I’m a great fan of both myself ๐
Cool ๐