Your ruby blood in mine,
a pure ecstasy,
melting of skins.
As I sighed, the breath took a curve
and emerged in two,
leaving behind zillion dew drops;
settling at the corners
of my parched mouth.
Crystalizing the moment in time.
Crystallization
So sensual and beautiful.
Thanks Lucy, so glad you liked it. Tried my hands in romance today 🙂
“Ruby blood” captured beautifully. Ending leaves you asking for more.
Just curiosity. Hindi ya urdu u don’t write? Would be nice to see your work in those languages
Thanks I’m glad you liked it, well unfortunately I don’t write in both the languages. I don’t have the ryt kind of words to compose a poetry in both these languages!
Okay. Try it. No harm. I want to read.
Sure will try it 🙂
beautiful and ecstatic, reminding me of that haunting song from ‘Sandinista’, the 1980’s album by the Clash: ‘Lose That skin’ : “you’ve got to lose that skin your imprisoned in’ —
Wow, wonderfully written sensuous romantic love poem. ❤
Thanks Drac, although romance and erotica not my forte just experimented!
Thanks John, I am gonna listen to the song that your referring too. I was listening “ Nothing’s gonna hurt you” by cigarettes after sex , hence the poem!
ahhh; you’ll enjoy it; the lyrics are great and so is the fiddle playing and Tymon Dogg’s voice, an old mate of Joe Strummer who was brought on board for that one song; play it LOUD 🙂
Would do John, now I’m all the more tempted now 🙂 a glass of wine may be with it to set the atmosphere!
great idea: it’s an outlier of a song for The Clash. Be curious to know what you think.
Will do and get back to 🙂
This is a sultry delight. Beautiful. 🙂
Thanks a lot Terveen, romance and erotica not my forte, just tried!
Absolutely sensuous, desirous and mesmerizing 💕
Thanks for your wonderful comment, really appreciate it!
My absolute pleasure. You words were charming
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wow 😊
🤗🤗❤️ thanks. I’ve just found your comments in my spam 😳