promised land
life, Love, Nature, poetry

Crystallization

Your ruby blood in mine,

a pure ecstasy,

melting of skins.

As I sighed, the breath took a curve

and emerged in two,

leaving behind zillion dew drops;

settling at the corners

of my parched mouth.

Crystalizing the moment in time.

20 thoughts on “Crystallization”

  1. “Ruby blood” captured beautifully. Ending leaves you asking for more.
    Just curiosity. Hindi ya urdu u don’t write? Would be nice to see your work in those languages

    1. Thanks Iโ€™m glad you liked it, well unfortunately I donโ€™t write in both the languages. I donโ€™t have the ryt kind of words to compose a poetry in both these languages!

  2. beautiful and ecstatic, reminding me of that haunting song from ‘Sandinista’, the 1980’s album by the Clash: ‘Lose That skin’ : “you’ve got to lose that skin your imprisoned in’ —

      1. Thanks Drac, although romance and erotica not my forte just experimented!

    1. Thanks John, I am gonna listen to the song that your referring too. I was listening โ€œ Nothingโ€™s gonna hurt youโ€ by cigarettes after sex , hence the poem!

      1. ahhh; you’ll enjoy it; the lyrics are great and so is the fiddle playing and Tymon Dogg’s voice, an old mate of Joe Strummer who was brought on board for that one song; play it LOUD ๐Ÿ™‚

      2. Would do John, now Iโ€™m all the more tempted now ๐Ÿ™‚ a glass of wine may be with it to set the atmosphere!

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