Your ruby blood in mine,
a pure ecstasy,
melting of skins.
As I sighed, the breath took a curve
and emerged in two,
leaving behind zillion dew drops;
settling at the corners
of my parched mouth.
Crystalizing the moment in time.
Your ruby blood in mine,
a pure ecstasy,
melting of skins.
As I sighed, the breath took a curve
and emerged in two,
leaving behind zillion dew drops;
settling at the corners
of my parched mouth.
Crystalizing the moment in time.
So sensual and beautiful.
Thanks Lucy, so glad you liked it. Tried my hands in romance today ๐
“Ruby blood” captured beautifully. Ending leaves you asking for more.
Just curiosity. Hindi ya urdu u don’t write? Would be nice to see your work in those languages
Thanks Iโm glad you liked it, well unfortunately I donโt write in both the languages. I donโt have the ryt kind of words to compose a poetry in both these languages!
Okay. Try it. No harm. I want to read.
Sure will try it ๐
beautiful and ecstatic, reminding me of that haunting song from ‘Sandinista’, the 1980’s album by the Clash: ‘Lose That skin’ : “you’ve got to lose that skin your imprisoned in’ —
Wow, wonderfully written sensuous romantic love poem. โค
Thanks Drac, although romance and erotica not my forte just experimented!
Thanks John, I am gonna listen to the song that your referring too. I was listening โ Nothingโs gonna hurt youโ by cigarettes after sex , hence the poem!
ahhh; you’ll enjoy it; the lyrics are great and so is the fiddle playing and Tymon Dogg’s voice, an old mate of Joe Strummer who was brought on board for that one song; play it LOUD ๐
Would do John, now Iโm all the more tempted now ๐ a glass of wine may be with it to set the atmosphere!
great idea: it’s an outlier of a song for The Clash. Be curious to know what you think.
Will do and get back to ๐
This is a sultry delight. Beautiful. ๐
Thanks a lot Terveen, romance and erotica not my forte, just tried!
Absolutely sensuous, desirous and mesmerizing ๐
Thanks for your wonderful comment, really appreciate it!
My absolute pleasure. You words were charming
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wow ๐
๐ค๐คโค๏ธ thanks. Iโve just found your comments in my spam ๐ณ