Dark clouds hovered,
the sapphirish Sun
came crashing down
in my emaciated lap.
Bushfires of prophetic
visions of dog licking
maggots spread on the
thin perforated roof.
The ancient ritualistic
fires had to be ignited
but it had already
begun, engulfing the
peripherals of the brain.
I went down with the
sapphirish Sun, It
was an absolute
eclipse.
An excellent description of an eclipse of the mind.
Thanks Van, suddenly these dark thoughts come hence the poem. Appreciate your kind and comment.
A total eclipse of the heart….
https://youtu.be/lcOxhH8N3Bo
Thanks Ivor for the like and the lovely song, appreciate it.
A good old song, but I did giggled at the film clip….what were they thinking back in those days…
I know 🤪
Powerfully written. Perfect.
Hey thanks man for reading and commenting. You’ve always been so generous, bless you.
You are very kind.
Alway my pleasure
🙏
you make a good deity 😊
Moon deity coz Sun makes every go haywire 😐
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