Oh ! destiny I’ve
been hit hard by
waves of rejection
A grain of sand
I know my worth,
I’ve been shown
seashore too many
times…
Oh! Destiny tell me
it is not a Sisyphean
fate!
What I sought
I never got!
The mighty Gods
conspired cornered me to
the coast,ย I cried
pellucid tears
deliquesced
into salt sea-waters
solitary with the
dry wells and theย
ruddy coasts!
Oh! Destiny, I
desire a drop
of those crystalline
waters that I can call
my own!
Absolutely divine and feelingful ๐
Thanks a lot Ramayani, I am so glad that you felt it so. Thank you very much for your kind words ๐ you really made mayday!
๐๐ it’s my pleasure. ๐
This is epic! โค๏ธ
Coming from you it means a lot G, I am in debt of you for such high praises always! Love โคโค
My pleasure Tanya. Itโs really a gorgeous piece!
Thanks a lot G ๐
Beautiful, Tanya. The plea with destiny worked beautifully and I love the sea-tears metaphor.
Thanks Wallace, I am so glad my words resonated. Although hydrophobic I am always fascinated by Sea hence metaphors :). Thanks for stopping by!
Fantastic
Thanks Davina for stopping by, you have a beautiful name, Davina….
Thanks ๐๐
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I felt the pain in it.๐ข
Rita, how kind of you, I am glad my words resonated! Truly appreciate it!
Happy I didn’t miss tis one. Bravo.
Thanks dear friend, truly grateful for your kind remarks!