Gentle translucent dew drops
brought along murky clouds
on grey chariots of northern winds
taking me in their mighty clutches
tossing, spinning me to the
dimensions of the other world,
as rays of amber Sun descended
on the eclipsed horizons, the
mighty chariots of Northern winds
froze in eternity and I once again
came back from the hell!
Great read, nice one my friend
Thanks a lot Tony, truly appreciate your kind words. Hope ur doing fine my friend!
All good thank and I hope you are too 🙂
I’m good 😊, thanks!! 🙏
A wondrous piece Tanya, and this particularly caught my eye
“mighty chariots of Northern winds “
I’m glad Ivor that you found it so! While penning this poem the thought of chariots pop up so penned in my poem 🙂 ! Truly appreciate your kind remarks!
Always my pleasure
🙏
Great poem.
I also loved that line about “mighty chariots of Northern winds”.
The poem has an otherworldly quality of mythological and unseen realms to it which of course is right up my alley.
Thanks Count, when I was penning poem the thought of chariot on winds came to my mind, I couldn’t help but write about it! I know you enjoy myth and legend and I’m totally honored that I could impress you 😁 .There is something about the unseen realms that seem to excite me 🙂
You use so beautiful words and phrases tht reading your poems are just a pleasant experience!
Ramyani I’m really honored with your kind words, I’m glad my words resonate with you. You made my day 🙂
It’s always my pleasure 😊
Loved this one , Tanya.Great portrayal of sadness
Thanks a lot Megha, coming from you it means a lot! Truly appreciate it!
My pleasure Tanya
Powerful words, well expressed. 🙂
Thanks a lot for your kind words, truly appreciate it 🙂
You are Welcome 🙂
🙏
Awesome read.
Thanks a lot Shantanu, truly appreciate it! 🙂
My absolute pleasure
Beautiful…
Thanks a lot,I am glad you felt it so, truly appreciate it!
Brilliant 👌
Thanks Sakshi for your comments mean a lot! I truly appreciate your kind words!
My pleasure always 😊
❤