Hearts of ashen copper refuse to
erode away in surprise torrential
downpours,
Adamant and resolute not to dissolve
in scorching heats & mighty
tempests they stand
their grounds .
For hearts of ashen copper are deftly
crafted to withstand the snobbery
of thundering bolts.
But the ruby hues wither away against
cold lovers who carry in their raven
souls tall blazing fires of basal
vengeance.
For hearts of ashen copper are no match
for the insecure prudish sires who
tremble harder than those
dying trees
The sturdy scarlet hues simply snap
against the jolts of venemous
breaths and indifferent
sighs !
Lovely piece of poetry. Your language and the expressions poured into this poem is fantastic. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on! 😊😊😊
Thanks a lot for your very kind words, truly humbled, and yes you will definitely see more from me:) 🙏
You are welcome 🙂
🙏🙂
Amazingly beautiful piece Tanya 💙😚
Thanks a lot Nirant, truly humbled by your kind words! I’m really glad you liked it!
Pleasure always for ur words ☺️
Beautiful 😍
Thanks honey for your kind read, hope you have been doing well!
Lovely!
Thanks a lot Warren 🙂
You’re welcome
🙂
Wow. Beautiful.
Thanks a lot Sunil, I’m so glad you liked it. Hope you have been doing well!
I am. What about you. Hope you are enjoying your holidays.
I’m fine thanks! My holidays are fine 🙂
Glad to hear.😊
🙂
The resilience of the heart and the shades of defiance – what a master of artistry your words are
Shantanu, I’m happy that you felt it so, it’s encouraging to hear good words 🙂
You write beautiful
Beautiful !
Thanks my friend, thanks for your kind read, truly appreciate it!
Love this!!!
Bill you love this and we love you 😉
Oh…
Sigh…..
🙂
🙂 !
Oh… Tanya.
Sigh…
Thank you!
😊
🙂
Your words ring true and are profoundly descriptive – especially poignant to me are these lines:
“But the ruby hues wither away against
cold lovers who carry in their raven
souls tall blazing fires of basal
vengeance.”
❤️👍😎
I’m so very glad you liked it, truly appreciate it. Indifference and vengeance two things that kill relationships …
Your words just baffle me … yet I want to keep reading them. You’re really something, Tanya, and I’m glad you’re blogging.
Sermon your words really encourage me to write more, thanks for your appreciation and encouragement. It truly means a lot to me.
Nice stuff to read
Thanks a lot, Akshaya! How very kind of you!:)
Thanks Akshaya, truly appreciate your kind words!
Beautiful
Thanks for your kind read!