I’ve possessed my bitter sorrows long back,
Adorned and wore it as part of my flesh ,
Pains which gushes as streams of scarlet blood
through blue veins, raging as river Nile
Like whiffs of cheap psychedelic drugs, I
consumed every bit and angle of my grief
For a woman doesn’t become a woman until
she gleefully begins to possess and wear her
pains, she transforms into a woman the moment
she glows while drowning in the lyres of pain
Those sickly bossoms turn fuller and rounder
gracefully carrying the heavy burdens of heart
and the faces emanate those rare effervescent
charms about whom blind poets often write and
Trembling painters paint perfectly with angular
strokes of nylon brush. those charms and glows
as streams of scarlet bloods pumped from the
aching hearts, gushing forth in blue veins.
Wao.. who can describe better …
“For a woman doesn’t become a woman until
she gleefully begins to possess and wear her ”
Your feelings are floating as clear true ship of paper over the cleaner sea of pain.. Lovely.
Thanks Raushan for liking it, I am truly humbled by your kind remarks! 🙏
Wear her *pain
Ah.. so gorgeous, Tanya 🌷💐💕
Thanks a lot my dear, I am so really glad that you liked it! 🙂
You are welcome 😊
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A very brilliantly written piece of poetic prose.
A very brilliantly written piece of poetic prose. ❤
Thanks a lot Dracula, so very kind of you. I am really glad that you liked it! 😊
Very well done. The pain that is inevitable in the transition to womanhood.
Thanks a lot Roth and you are spot on. Pain is absolutely inevitable in transition to womanhood. 👌
You are welcome.
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Beautiful!
Thanks Vidhur for your kind read. I am glad you felt it so!
Tanya this just hits the right chords ……. bravo 👏
Hey Sakshi, hope your fine. Thanks for liking it, all the pains that go into making is woman 🙂
The power called women and the mesmerizing words of Tanya. Amazing.
Thanks for your read Shantanu, the pain that requires to transform into a woman.
Well said Tanya
My pleasure
Superb insight into a woman’s life. Thank you !
Thanks my friend, the pain that goes into making a being called woman. 🙂
Oh, my God, this was so gorgeous. Loved the line about a woman becoming a woman
To tell you the truth, it’s one of my favorite poems too! The pain that is needed for transition into woman, thanks for reading. I am truly humbled!
Very inspiring.
Thanks my friend!