The day I pass on and become a shooting-
star, disintegrat into million
Think of me an anonymous vision
who came and went on
A mundane dream who lived well and
relished all the bounties
An unveiled phantom who roamed the
narrow aching streets as the
A faint glimmer who flickered when
the winds were harsh and the
At twilight when withered wax had
deliquesced, I a common vision
simply melt down ..
32 thoughts on “Shooting Star”
As always, so richly and beautifully spoken Tanya!
Thanks Bill, a life lived well 😊
Definitely! We only have one!
So go my friend , I bless you to fully enjoy the day today!! 👍
Thank you… and the same to you!! 😊😊!!
I am gonna sleep till noon! 🙏
Argh!!! I’m just going to work now! 😁
Ha ha drink well and eat very well, this is the task I ordain you today! I’ll ask what you eat and drank at twilight😊. This is ur mission eat well, drink well!
Your wish I my command! Have a beautiful sleep!
I adore this…. so other worldly.. just beautiful <3
Thanks my love, glad you liked it. Life lived well and then simply melt out’
A beautiful way to go… 🙂
Thanks, my dear, hope you are fine!
Tanya, this is beautiful
Thanks dear, means alot coming from a brilliant writer like you!
Oh please ❤️
I mean it 🙂
Thanks a lot Sakshi, so very kind of you. Hope you enjoyed on Diwali!
My pleasure Tanya 😊 ………. Ya extended celebration going on will last till this weekend 😄
Same here Sakshi, just celebrating! In childhood I would go to Deep market in Ashok Vihar for Diwali fair and have dosa from Sangam Restaurent there 🙂
Arrey arrey. you reminded me of my childhood … between I still go to Deep market …. although no fair. We have to connect via email 😁😉
How beautiful. Vivid and all love
Thanks a lot, just living life well…..
May that candle forever burn bright, may your heart gaze endlessly; as your soul becomes a shooting star! Lovely!
Thanks a lot Warren for your kind wishes, I am truly touched! I am glad that you liked my words :)! Blessings