You embraced my being like the fallen
withered leaves of the deceased autumn
Shrouded me from the chills and breezes
I leapt on to you for the tenders caresses
and fiesty cajolings, but then you went
away like the autumn winds, abandoning
me at a site where once stood an ancient
tree the siloutees of whose roots still lurks
in the muddy grounds like shadows of your
long embraces on my soul, the dry barren
heart like the decayed hollows of the dead
tree, I lingered on rootless through the
burial grounds wept and sobbed at the
passing of your warm kisses and gentle
touches just like the death of autumn of
winds….
A sad but beautiful poem.
Thanks a lot Dracula, meloncholia hits sometimes but still I am careful of not to smuge my makeup 💄 what if Pan Goatee bumps into me?
LOL ! 😁
I love the soul echoes in this one. <3
Hi dear, thanks a lot for liking. Just wrote lady evening after feeling a bit sad. Anyways how are you doing ?
Aww im sorry for slow reply it was night time. Sending you a huge hug. Im okay just tired really but coping..not as sad as late last week. Much love to you Tanya.🤗💞
That’s fine dear, I can understand. Hugs to you dear, take care ❤️❤️
You’ve really connected a deep place of emotion with this Tanya. I so feel it.
Really well done!
Hi Bill, thanks a lot for reading and your insight. I am so glad that you liked, I just wrote last evening feeling pangs of Meloncholia. Have a great day ahead!
I completely understand. Even if I have a theme planned for my daily writing…that is quickly over written by my mood/emotions at the time.
I have a beautiful fall day before me…and I hope to enjoy it fully. I wish the same for you!
Guess you are right, Poetry is spontaneous recollections irrespective what theme we plan
Exactly… the heart over rules the mind every time… Yes?
I know on top I can’t stop writing ✍️
I’m with you!!
Ha ha every time a thought strikes I have to scribble
My too. I put notes in One Note on my phone!
Same here , thoughts keep clashing, inks keep drooling, nibs keep breaking
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Hi
The piece was absolutely wonderful. Beautifully written but at the same time it made me sad all the same.
Hi Moushmi, I am glad you liked and the words resonated, however I didn’t want you to feel sad. So cheer up 😊 and have a wonderful day ahead😊
Oh this was so deep and melancholy
Thanks Shantanu, I am glad it resonated with you. Hope you have a joyful day ahead!
It sure did. You too have a wonderful day
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Really beautiful.
Thanks I am so glad you liked it, coming from such talented poet as you, makes me truly humbled. Thank you!
What a wonderful thing to say. Thank you! Peace.
🙏you indeed are a great poet and a wonderful soul. Blesdings
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Loved the way you have described the poignant autumn season.Specially the mention” deceased autumn”.
Thanks Megha for your in depth readings of my poem and leaving an insight, I am truly humbled. Nature always inspires me!
Nature is one of the most beautiful muse we are bestowed with.
Absolutely Megha!!
Poignant and so beautiful
thanks for your kind words, truly appreciate it. Just an ode to the passing autumn!