Never could pen a verse of love
It’s wasn’t so that lovers were scarce
Nor I was coy or ever blind,
A gentle breeze did touch my cheek once
Wondered which direction it came from
North, South, East or the West
But before the blink of eye it was gone
The beloved had traveled far to the
Exotic lands, for he was a pilgrim
he had to return, the rendezvous was
short, it was over before it began
I could never pen a verse of love.
Tanya Shukla
Loved it !
Good morning dear 😃
Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading. Have a good day!
I disagree. You just did pen a verse of love. And a lovely one. ☺
May be you are right, I just did. Hopefully my husband doesn’t read this otherwise he would wonder which love I am talking about. 🙂 Thanks for your valuable comment, I truly;y appreciate it.
This is beautifully written, a creative imagination and a pure depiction of love. You are very talented, indeed.
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Thanks for your valuable words, I truly appreciate it. For sure Ill check out your blog. Take care
Yey. Thank you so much, dear.
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You’re welcome, I enjoyed it. How long have you been blogging?
I am fairly new to this whole blogging
So beautiful.
Thanks a lot for your kind remarks 🙂
Thank you my friend for you kind words as always. I am truly humbled.
Beautifully written!
Thanks alot Warren!! 🙂
You’re welcome
Thanks alot Warren, you are always very kind.
You’re very welcome
Ah,,, Tanya,, this is so beautiful… “A gentle breeze did touch my cheek once” I can’t get over this!
I am so glad you liked it, you are an amazing poet. I truly appreciate you time and feedback. Thanks a lot. Regards.
You are an amazing poet too! It’s a pleasure to read your work!
You are kind in your praises. Have a great day 🙂
You too!!!
🙂
Loved it. .It’s deep 💓👌✨
Thanks dear for reading, I am glad you felt it so. Take care
Oh my you stole a piece of heart with this poem. 😊😊
Aww I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking time out and reading it.
For sure. Always a pleasure
🙂
From the Heart it came
To reach other Hearts
This Verse of Love.
Shiva
Wow, Shiva amazing feedback even better than the poem itself. Truly appreciate your kind words. Regards
It was just my thought reflection to your lines.
After all it is from one Heart to the other.
Stay Blessed
Beautiful lines Shiva, yes it is always one heart to other….)
Wonderful work as usual Tanya. You do pen love very well and your thoughts are thought-provoking. 🙂
Thanks Ron for your kind comments. I truly appreciate it.
My pleasure. 🙂
😊😊
Well…I just had to read this one again…just one last time tonight.
I apologize.
🙂
That’s really my pleasure Bill, I’m glad you liked it, and now ur making me happy 🙂
Lovely poem, Tanya, and thank you for following BrewNSpew.
Thanks a lot for your kind words. My pleasure!