Walk on unafraid without
thinking of
The hurt of foes or friends
Be the captain of
Your ship
Sail slowly in the direction
Of lucky star
Never be in haste
For slow and steady
Wins the race
March on fearless
Through the darkest alleys
Carrying the torch of
One God above
Fathers, lovers will
Try to hold on
Liberate yourself from
Shackles of their kinds
You are the mistress of
Your own fate
Never bow down to
The trying times
Never barter heart for
Few pounds
Don’t become an open
Book for world
To discard
Carry the essence
Of few mysteries in your heart
Never carry fragile
emotions on your sleeves
Preserve the innermost
At the core of your soul
Peel off the layers of
apprehensions and
inhibitions of
Any kind
Go run naked
Under the blue sky
For the world is your abode
Mighty sky above
the roof
Humble earth beneath
Your cradle
Live your life to the fullest that’s
Your mother’s only
Advice
(I wrote this poem for my daughter, Trisha when she was six months, this was my advice to her in life)
This is amazing 🤗
thanks alot
Thanks dear, hope you’re doing good.
What an Awesome Ode to a Daughter when she is even six months.
Regards
Shiva
Thanks alot, i truly appreciate it
Thanks alot Shiva, I am glad you liked it. I trule appreciate your kind words.
A wonderful poem.
Thanks alot
And the advice is good so is your way of giving life to the words.
Again a fine work.
Thanks, I always feel very encouraged by your words. Regards
You are welcome.
A brilliant piece of advice. Carry some mysteries in your heart, that bought smiles to me 😊🌸
I wrote it last year when my daughter was 6 months, decided to pen feelings in words 🙂
And you did a fab job 😊🌸
Thanks dear
😊🌸
The Bible says to speak life, over yourself and those you love! Beautifully said, and wonderful advice!
Thanks alot for you’re kind words, I trule appreciate it.
My pleasure!
Strong, nice, beautiful and gentle advice to daughter…awesome piece of writing 🙂
Thanks Krishna, I wrote the poem when my daughter was six months old. I am glad you liked it. Regrads
Saluting the mother in you 😊 ur daughter is lucky 😊
Thanks Krishna, I feel I am lucky to have her, since she is born I feel more empowered and less anxious than before. Regards
This is a beautiful tribute to your daughter!
Thanks a lot Dwight, I’m glad you liked it. Appreciate it.
You are welcome1